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Always Tommorow by ~LadyRebelGrace:iconLadyRebelGrace:

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Zuko lay down.
"You blundering idiot! Can't you learn a simple bending manuver?!" His Father yelled angrily kicking aside his boots and slamming the door. Zuko sat down on his bed.
"I'm sorry Father." Taking a deep intake of breath. His side hurt still. His Father had been "training" him all day. The door opened.
"Hey, big brother." Zuko looked up. "Having a bad day?" she asked.
"Shut up, Azula!"
"Aww big brother had a bad day." she said. She was evil. She really was.
"No."
"You know Mom came back today?" Zuko jumped up.
"You're lying!"
"Oh and you've become so smart."
"SHUT UP AZULA!" Zuko yelled. His voice echoing. The door slammed open. His Father stomped in.
"WHAT DID I TELL YOU ABOUT RAISING YOUR VOICE IN MY HOSEHOLD?!" Fire Lord Ozai screamed.
"Not to." he said quietly. Almost cowering under his Father's shadow.  
"Good." The Fire Lord lead his daughter out of the room.
"Father?" The Fire Lord stopped. "Any news from Mother?" The Fire Lord shook his head and continued out the door as Azula looked back and stuck her tongue out on him.  Zuko lay down on his bed.
"Tommorow I'll be better. I'll beat that stupid General in an Agni Kai! The he'll love me."
©2006-2009 ~LadyRebelGrace
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The day before Zuko's battle with his Father. It very short.
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~AmbrMerlinus:iconAmbrMerlinus: Aug 10, 2006, 2:34:28 PM
I like the detail of Azula telling Zuko their mother had returned, just to be mean. It shows her manipulative nature.

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~Tyrant231:iconTyrant231: Aug 10, 2006, 4:01:33 PM
hmm very nice you desirve some credit.

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~LadyRebelGrace:iconLadyRebelGrace: Aug 12, 2006, 6:54:38 AM
thnak youu. -.-
that means a lot to me.

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~LadyRebelGrace:iconLadyRebelGrace: Aug 12, 2006, 6:56:19 AM
Thanks. ^^ thank you for the comment!!!

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Let me be your wings.
~Tyrant231:iconTyrant231: Aug 12, 2006, 6:58:38 PM
Your welcome it is like me to bepolite also I have an avatar fanfic my self if you would like too read it.

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I see Chaos nothing but chaos....The world want's peace...and there will be no peace only the embrace of Chaos.
~SecretNinja909:iconSecretNinja909: Oct 4, 2006, 4:53:57 PM
ummmmm the battle was on te same day tat Zuko stood up actully to be more Specific it was at Night not the next day, but it's nice.
~LadyRebelGrace:iconLadyRebelGrace: Oct 5, 2006, 3:20:06 AM
thnx ^^

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Mood: Sentimental ~Kitsune-Shetani:iconKitsune-Shetani: Sep 16, 2007, 3:39:48 PM
oooo me loves ^^ even if its short s'jus...idk i guess the word should be powerful full of angust (sorry if i spelled that wrong o.O)
favs =^.^=

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hey if you can't laugh at yourself.....i'll be more then happy to do it for you =^.^=
~LadyRebelGrace:iconLadyRebelGrace: Sep 17, 2007, 3:56:41 AM
thnks so mucch ^^ ur reaaly sweet.

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